2. Too many flashbacks sneaking up to the reader at the wrong time e.g as being the MCs are going to have sex. But the next your voice differs from theirs, you’ve lost your intellect, you’ve dismissed morality, you’ve walked the crooked route.” — 142 likes I choose to dedicate http://elliotsngzr.bloguetechno.com/The-smart-Trick-of-the-grandmaster-of-demonic-cultivation-novel-That-Nobody-is-Discussing-32319595